Breath-Life
Reviews, Blurbs & Excerpts
Breath-Life poems nominated for a Pushcart Prize.
Reviews
Review (Excerpt) by Seamas O'Flannagain in The Culvert Chronicles, September 16-22, 2010:
Pick up Juanita Torrence-Thompson’s new volume, Breath-Life
on a tired Friday, a lonely Saturday, or any old rainy night when you
need sunshine or a smile. Just a few pages into her poetry, you’ll find
yourself with an admirably playful and creative poet who will, if need
be, tickle us into appreciating life.
Most poetry, perhaps too much, dwells pensively on
sadness, loss, and inevitably, death. It is, perhaps, understandable and
inevitable, for us to bemoan our outcast (or just plain painful) state.
Even the allegedly hopeful among us, phoenix feathers in our caps, must
make sure we have a good look at death and destruction before caroling
about resurrection. And we know that beauty alone is boring if it can’t
be lost and thus lamented. We know too well that always at our backs we
hear time’s winged chariot and so on and so forth... roaring along after
us.
But sometimes for all the sad truths that poetry
tells, we need a bit of cheering up because a laugh is just as real as a
cry even if it’s not as dramatic or dignified. That’s when I reach for Breath-Life and let Torrence-Thompson take me over to the bright side.
The first part of the book, “Word Play” is exactly
that: twenty-four glittery, wittywise language riffs that mix and meld
words in a bright, jazz-like way. A bit like Salvador Dali set to music,
these wordplays/poems fuse random and slippery smooth images into
conundrums, wordjams, and silly tongue toys. I like “Silkscreen,” or
“Catwoman,” the sly homage to an alley cat (homeward bound?) seen out
after sunrise.
In the second part, “In This Heat,”
Torrence-Thompson presents us with a range of more familiar moods and
themes. With only one striking exception, all these poems are infused
with a hopeful and affirming touch that avoids sentimentality.
Throughout, they have a tightness and compactness that can range from
crisp to cryptic. In most, she gives a wink to the reader who knows
what’s skipped over and why, as in “Ghazel#6.”
Veering from pithy sagacity to dark comedy,
Torrence-Thompson runs us through a series of prose poems based on
newspaper headlines that she infuses with a snarky, edgy whimsy. “Kids
Make Nutritious Snacks,” “Local High School Dropouts Cut in Half” and my
favorite, “Police Begin Campaigning to Run Down Jaywalkers.”
Music, dance and humor play all through this
section, and poem leads us to poem. There is definitely an urban feel
here-the pace, the quick shift from scene to scene, creates a pulsing
life that beats through this part of the book. It’s a big city book, too
fast-moving, too hip and sweet for small slow villages or mountain
towns no matter how true or heartdeep. And then, when she has us moving,
our minds stepping out with that swift city sidewalk walk, jaywalking
from idea to idea:
Explosion
I fold sky
crease earth
wrinkle sky
fold moon
crease sky
wrinkle earth.
I tip sky
leon on stars
slit earth
I split sky
split moon
split earth
split man and woman
split mind that explodes stars
©2009 Juanita
Torrence-Thompson
There it is, especially for a New Yorker reading a
New York poet, in the middle of all that joy and savvy city stuff, the
memory of “that day.” It’s not the last poem, it’s not the dominant
poem, but it’s there and all of a sudden all those other poems become
more important, more affirming of life as they make us laugh and puzzle
and squint hopefully through it all. We need to keep a book like this
within reach so we remember that life, ordinary life and its joys, are
such treasures: Breath-Life poems by Juanita-Torrence Thompson, a good poet, a good book. ” (See full review: The Culvert Chronicles column, September 16-22)
Excerpt Review from Rattle magazine by Valerie Martin Bailey (author and former Poet Laureate of San Antonio, Texas):
Breath-Life JUANITA TORRENCE THOMPSON
Scopcraeft Press
Portales, New Mexico
ISBN 978-1-8-8160478-5
2009, 56 pp. $12.00
With Breath comes Life, and so it is in Breath-Life,
the sixth collection of poetry by Juanita Torrence-Thompson. Part I,
titled “Word Play,” is indeed playful and the first poem “Alphabet Soup
#1” takes the reader on a merry, tongue-twisting romp through the
alphabet in a delightful style that is as fanciful as Dr. Seuss for
grown-ups with alliterative treats like:
…licorice-licking lecturers laughing and dancing the Macarena, munching mincemeat and mayonnaise at Mobil malls…
The poem, an extended abecedarian form, is written
as prose, but with its bouncy rhythm and crisp alliterations, there is
nothing prosy about it. The first section features twenty-three
additional short poems that are equally innovative. I had the sensation
of flight as I dipped and twirled from poem to poem like a butterfly on
“lime-tinted wings” to sip the nectar from “dreamy dahlias,” while
“tweaking ascending roses” in a “whirling garden of verbs”-these poems
are “syncopated dollops of color” in a world of blue that “surrounds
and surrounds.”
Life is rich and savory in Part II, titled “In This
Heat,” and Juanita Torrence-Thompson is the Iron Chef of poetry, using
language with a bold creativity that declares this poet is not afraid to
experiment as she dishes up fresh, unexpected metaphors and whimsical
imagery that has no echo. Breath-Life is the full-meal-deal-soul
food for those who hunger for new taste sensations in the search for the
human soul….” (See full review at: www.rattle.com)
Blurbs
“Breath-Life is an absolutely
beautiful book. Juanita Torrence-Thompson is such an exquisite crafter
of poems, almost like a jeweler who selects each stone or in her case
words with great thought and precision. ...I enjoyed her book so much,
however, my very top choices from Breath-Life are: “Kids Make
Nutritious Snacks,” “Aida,” “African Absurdity,” “Barriers,” “Ride
Through the Night,” “He Clings Like Windblown Leaves” and “In This
Heat.””
—Laura Boss: Arms: New and Selected Poems (Guernica) & editor of LIPS
“Reading Breath-Life in the
chaos of the hospital gave me Life-Breath. It is a beautiful, magical,
meaningful work. Dazzling in its dream narratives, musical language and
sensuous images. It put a smile on my face when I really needed it.”
—Rex Sexton (award-winning poet & novelist. Acclaimed by Kirkus Discoveries: Desert Flower & The Time Hotel.)
“Breath-Life is an apt title
for Ms. Torrence-Thompson’s amazing new book, because the poems are
ultimately about the elusiveness of the soul, how it appears briefly as
the object of love, and fades away if you try to hold on to it. Ms.
Torrence-Thompson’s poems are like self-portraits of the soul, the
Gordon Parks of poetry. She’s not like the father of Icarus who lets us,
the readers, get too close to the sun. She steers us away. She’s a poet
whose concern for her reader is as great as her need to get every word
right. One of the great accomplishments of the book is she
single-handedly rescues the prose poem from being prosy and injects it
with life. ”
— Hal Sirowitz, author: Mother Said, Former Queens Poet Laureate
“Juanita Torrence-Thompson’s new book of poems (Breath-Life)
is exciting because it is more daring. She’s opening up, taking risks,
experimenting and the results are unexpected. She exhibits a new
freshness in her work. Poems like “Alphabet Soup #1,” “Flowers Read The
Targeted Brain,” “Her Sweet Ear Flowered” show us these strengths. Paul
Eluard and Andre Breton would admire these. Absolutely throwing all
caution to the wind and the reader will too.”
— Tom McKeown, author: The Ocean in the Sleepwalker’s Hands
“Breath-Life offers us the work of a gifted
poet whose joyful rhythms sustain her insights and power. I truly loved
the vitality, the rush and leaps and the honesty of the poems.”
— Simon Perchik author: Hands Collected The Books of Simon Perchik 1949-99
Excerpts from Breath-Life (Scopcraeft Press) By Juanita Torrence-Thompson
MY SOUL
My soul, a rhapsody
plays melodies at each stanza
each insatiable syllable
My soul, an epistle,
reads chapters of memories
recites ebullient phrases…
SILKSCREEN
Myrtle drifts like rivulets
into nature's silkscreen
ascending, engaging,
now descending softly
into a grassy cubbyhole
where it languishes
singing the blues
singing the greens
LOCAL HIGH SCHOOL DROPOUTS
CUT IN HALF
Parents, the Mayor's office, police and the little community of
Woe-is-me, Wisconsin were up in alms about the inept cutting of six
Woe-is-me student dropouts. The culprit, Carl Cutter, a jewelry cutter
by trade, was known as a cutup since high school days. Police suspected
Cutter, the cutter, wanted to get even with the dropouts for dropping
out. On the eventful day, he captured the dropouts with laughing gas and
cut them in half with cutting remarks. Everyone is up in alms because
Cutter got drunk and groggily stitched the dropouts back together after
dropping the top of each student onto the wrong bottom. Carl Cutter was
found guilty and sentenced to 20 years of cutting granite.
Breath Life poetry excerpts
Copyright ©1999, 2011 by Juanita Torrence-Thompson
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